Sorry for the long, LONG pause readers. School was a rough time. Anyway, I'm back, and so is my novel (With better grammar, I hope). Also putting the old version in the auxiliary.
Without stalling, onto the remake!
"So... let me get this straight, I died, and not only did I die, I died when I chocked on a raisin?" I speak to the floating ball of light in front of me.
"Yes, but do not fear mortal, I have taken pity on you and decided to revive you with 2 wishes." Despite the orb not having a mouth or any other sensible way of speaking, I hear it just fine.
"Wait! Why not the classic tree wishes?" I ask confused.
"One wish was used so you would remember your past life, or do you not want to?"
"Of course want to!" I answered as fast as I could, not wanting to test its patience, if it had any.
"So... for my first wish I want a system! But not any system. A femboy system!" I say with zero hesitation.
But when I looked at the white ball, I could only see disappointment despite it not changing in any way.
"W- well you see-" I try to defend myself but it cuts me off without a moments notice. "I will neither ask or care what you answer, it shall be granted."
Flustered I continue to speak. "For my next wish... I wish to look like Miquella!"
"I see..." At this point the ball is no longer hiding its disappointment. "But alas, if you wish for it to be so... it shall happen." It speaks yet again.
"I'll show you your... status screen if you wish to change anything."
As it said that a sudden golden screen showed up close to my face... too close. I try to move it away with my hands and to my surprise it's not a stationary things.
As I shift it to a place I'm comfortable with it staying, I start to read the text on it...
☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆
Name: Miquella (New)
Class: Femboy/Seductress
Sex: Male?
Charisma: 35
Strength: 7
Intelligence: 10
Stamina: 10 (200/200)
Health: 10 (100/100)
(Human avrage: 10)
System points: 0
Skills: N/A
[Quests]
[Shop]
[World travel]
☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆
"It looks perfect! Everything I wanted to have is there!" I say as I scan through the system once again.
"Yes, now please leave, I'll be placing you down In a somewhat safe world, but there will be paranormal entities there too, like the raisin in your past world."
As I slowly start to disappear from the room, I speak my final words "Thanks again and... wait the raisin was what!?"
But before I could get an answer, I have already completely disappeared, the last thing I hear is a faint "Heh." from the round ball.
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I finally start to wake up from my sleep, now in a completely new room.
"It wasn't a dream!" I yell as I look around for anything to see myself in. In a corner I see a small mirror that I pick up and check myself out.
[Picture]
"Damn I'm hot." I say to myself as I turn around, checking myself in the mirror.
After some time of checking myself out, I look outside my new houses window, I see that I'm in a relatively urban area, despite that I don't see any skyscrapers.
Before I'm able to fully check out the new seea or even the new house, a loud ding rings in my ear.
[Several new skills have been acquired, please check the system.]
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Question: Incest? Yes or no, and If yes, with who?
A way thanks for checking out my rewrite guys, will try to keep this one up linger than the other one.
Also because I'm greedy, stone me~