This is my first novel I’m ever making and I am not the best at gramma. Feedback would be nice as well as suggestions for the novel.

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Duren was a lonely guy who was just kicked from collage. He was the top of his class until he was betrayed by one of his friends and blamed for something he didn’t do.

All he did his entire life was drown himself in maga comic books and studying and didn’t have much time for friends. Except one, who he put such faith in only to be thrown under the bus And he was expelled. 

He lay on the side walk drunk when he saw a family of three crossing the street. He was jealous due for them being happy and longed for that happiness when he saw in the dark a trunk heading straight towards the family.

His legs moved without thinking and dived in front of the family pushing them out of the way. (You can guess what happened next.)

well That was something, a wise voice said.

I’ll give you an opportunity to live again.

I know it seems bad I already gave up on this novel but I decided to create a new one and it's called restart at life and I love it much more than this one check it out.😀😊🗿🍔🍔🍔


Chapter 2 - hello