Something has been really bothering me.
I took a look at one of my poems recently via my cell phone -I tend to type and post from a computer- and I realized that none of my poems have the proper spaces between the segments!
To me, they seem to come off as like...run-on sentences.
Very long and intricate run-on sentences...
That was NOT my intention lbvs.
However I also never get any comments, so I wouldn't know if that is a problem to you all or not, you know? For the sake of...fluidity?
So, with that being said -unless there is some objection- I am going to go back and edit all of them so that the spacing is fixed.
The only way I know -and can see- to do this is to add dashes between the segments so that they can be distinguished.
just simple dashes.
Let me know if that makes my works a bit easier to digest lol.
Or don't!
Who am I to tell you how to enjoy something?
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-Redd.