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Chapter 38 - Update

Sorry guys for being away so long. A Family member died after a long battle with health issues. Routines had to be adjusted, then got hit with changes on the job, been trying my best to figure my way forward after I started back reading the last chapters this week.

This was my first crack at writing and after re-reading my own work, i realized that better could have been done. I'm asking you guys to give me your comments to figure out which would be better.

1. Resume and press forward and try to utilize the system more.

2. Reboot the story, Tywin is still the main, but instead take a more Alchemist oriented without a system.

Reasons for the change is because of power creep issues I forsee in the future.

I want to hash this out before I resume.

Thanks for those who have read and like the story so far. I'm not a delinquent author, just had to face some changes and wasn't able to give my best.

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