(Writer's Heat: Here's the edited chapter in a dramatic, intense style with final edits and suspense details)
:Purple Void Offers "Severia's" voice screamed in his skull like an ice needle:
**"Phase 2 will begin on 3... 2..."** He didn't finish counting. The world turned upside down.
**:World of Puzzles** Neo found himself standing on a semi-transparent pedestal beneath which lay an endless void of glowing blue stars. The purple sky bled crimson light from unseen cracks. The air was so cold that his breath condensed into ghostly clouds, and the place smelled metallic as if it had been carved from ancient blood.
The system board exploded before his eyes with a suspicious red light:
[Vacation training 3/1]
[Stage 2 - (Refraction Realms)] [Warning: Survival Rate - 47%]
"No time to hesitate," he whispered as he grabbed the Venzdnow sword, which began to melt into the air like a black cloud.
**Scene 2: The First Wave of Monsters** The monsters poured down like a flood from hell. The first to appear were the **Shadow Ghouls**: black, eyeless figures, their mouths swirling light-absorbing vortices. Neo leaped back as the [Void Element] unleashed tiny cracks that engulfed the attacking limbs.
**Smells**: Swamp rot mixed with bone powder. **Sounds**: Screeching like grinding glass.
Before he could catch his breath, a "Crystal Golem" rose from the void: a translucent giant whose internal ribs reflected distorted images of Neo's own face. The first blow shattered Neo's left arm. The Saiyan's golden blood (a subtle reference to his genetic transformation) spattered the ground in threads of light.
** : False Calm** After two hours of continuous fighting, the invasion abruptly stopped. Neo sank to his knees, his body trembling with exhaustion. Suddenly, his ears picked up the sound of a massive heartbeat, ticking like a clock with its second hand ticking to death.
Severia appeared as a blue ghost: **"Threat level increased to 89%. Something is coming... something I've never seen before."**
The stars beneath his feet began to disappear one by one like a candle going out.
**:Final Boss - Kenazworth** From the black void, a building-sized hand emerged from petrified flesh, sprouting yellow eyes. The floor turned to a viscous liquid, and the air filled with the screams of trapped souls.
**[The Leader]**:
- Name: [Dissolver of Worlds - Kenazworth] - Form: A distorted body of monstrous wings and multiple humanoid arms, its mouth is circular and filled with rotating teeth. - Ability: Absorbs the energies of attackers and transforms them into new monsters.
. ** **: Neo tries to attack the yellow eyes, but each cut causes a blue acid explosion. . **Second Phase**: Kenazworth swallows Vinzdno's sword, forcing Neo to use [Dark Element] to conjure phantom weapons. . **Climax**: As Neo was about to collapse, his eyes glowed a strange golden color (signalling the Saiyan transformation). He attacked with a violent blow that tore through the monster's body, but...
**Surprise**: Kenazworth's wounds have begun to regenerate using Neo's spilled golden blood!
**Scene Five: The Price** Neo groans as he tries to get up. "What are you…?" Kenazworth laughs, his voice cracking like bones. "I am the hunger that will not be satisfied… I am…"
Before he could complete the sentence, the world suddenly collapsed. Neo returned to his room, covered in blood (his own). On the system screen:
[Training Suspended] [Reason for Suspension: Body Damage Rate Exceeds 80%] [Reward: +★ to Void Element]
Severia appears with a serious face: **"You survived... but now he's spotted you."**
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