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Chapter 28 - Chapter 28: The Origin Wakes

Even in silence, the abyss had a pulse.

It wasn't the beating of a heart—

but something more ancient, more monstrous.

A rhythm beneath all things.

And now, that rhythm was changing.

The throne pulsed with an unnatural warmth under Evelyn's hand.

The shadows had grown still.

The wails of the dead… gone.

But the quiet was not peace.

It was warning.

Echoes of Before

Deep beneath the throneroom,

beyond where even the First King had dared to tread,

a lightless chamber flickered to life.

Inscribed upon its walls were the first words ever spoken in the abyss—

etched in blood that had never dried,

written by something older than sin.

And within the center of the chamber,

a cocoon of pure shadow

—dormant for eons—

cracked.

A single, skeletal hand emerged.

Not dead.

Not alive.

But primordial.

It reached for the void, and the void shuddered.

Above, Evelyn fell to one knee.

A sudden pressure bore down on her shoulders,

as if the entire abyss had grown heavier in a breath.

"What… is this?" she whispered, sweat cold on her brow.

A voice—

not from around her,

but from within her—

whispered back:

"You've broken the cycle. Now face what created it."

A Gathering Storm

As Evelyn struggled to rise, the spirits that once flocked to her began to retreat.

They, too, felt it.

The awakening.

The wrongness.

And far across the abyssal lands,

figures began to stir.

—A pale priest buried in a tower of salt began to weep blood.

—A chained behemoth groaned beneath molten chains that began to melt.

—An orphaned child who hadn't spoken in a hundred years whispered, "It's waking."

The abyss was no longer just hers.

It was becoming aware.

And it remembered the one who had once ruled everything.

The Voice from the Deep

Then came the voice.

Not a whisper.

Not a roar.

A sound that bent time.

That unspooled language into madness.

"Daughter of dust... bearer of borrowed flame..."

The floor beneath Evelyn split.

A chasm yawned open, not black,

but colorless,

as if it had swallowed even the concept of light.

And from that void rose a face.

Not one made of flesh—

but of shadow, memory, bone, and rage.

Eyes like twin singularities locked onto Evelyn.

She didn't run.

Didn't scream.

She stood—barely.

Her blade raised.

Her crown flickering.

"I claimed the abyss," she said.

"You are too late."

The face grinned.

"I am the abyss."

The world inverted.

And the true war began.

Descent Beyond Shadows

The world collapsed around Evelyn—

not in pieces,

but in meaning.

Up was down.

Light had never existed.

Her name was… what was it again?

She stood in a place that defied reality—

a realm beneath the abyss itself.

Not a place of torment,

but of uncreation.

A space where gods had once feared to look.

Where language died,

and time held its breath.

The Origin—

that grotesque shape of void and knowing—

watched her with patience only eternity could afford.

"You walk where no queen should tread."

Its voice no longer echoed in her head.

It lived in her bones.

But Evelyn clenched her fists,

and her blade—formed of truth and defiance—

remained alight.

"Then I am no queen. I am the heretic who burned the script."

Truth Wounds

With a blink,

a thousand memories not her own assaulted her.

A child devoured by shadow.

A city swallowed by silence.

A god kneeling in apology.

Every glimpse whispered the same truth:

The abyss had never been a prison.

It had been a womb.

And now, it was in labor.

The Origin rose higher.

Its form impossible,

its shape constantly shifting—

a mass of beginnings that hated being forgotten.

"You are the wound. The rebellion. The spark that should have died."

Evelyn's voice cut through the void:

"Then let me burn."

She struck.

But the Origin didn't move.

Instead, her sword stopped inches from its core—

not by force,

but by doubt.

Her hands trembled.

Her thoughts—fractured.

Was she wrong? Was this her fault?

The Origin smiled.

It fed on uncertainty.

It thrived on erosion.

But something else stirred.

Within Evelyn, beneath the fear—

was fire.

Not of destruction,

but of defiance.

She screamed.

And her blade flared—

not with light,

but with clarity.

She remembered who she was.

Not chosen. Not born. Not fated.

Self-made.

And in that moment, she stabbed forward—

not at the Origin—

but into the abyss itself.

Breaking the Pattern

The realm quaked.

A fracture spread across the impossible sky.

The veil split—

revealing the truths that had always been hidden:

—That the First King had been a pawn.

—That the throne was bait.

—That the abyss was never evil… only misunderstood.

The Origin howled,

its form unraveling under Evelyn's defiance.

"You break what you do not comprehend!"

"No," Evelyn whispered, standing tall.

"I break it because I do."

And with one final breath,

she thrust her blade deeper into the void.

Reality shattered.

The world turned inside out.

And Evelyn fell…

not down—

but through.

Into what came before beginnings.

The Beforeplace

There was no landing.

No ground.

No weight.

Only a drifting sense that falling was too small a word

for what Evelyn was experiencing.

She was moving through something deeper than space—

a canvas where reality had never been painted.

And it was empty.

Not silent, not still,

but raw.

It felt like thought hadn't yet been invented here.

Like meaning hadn't taken root.

She didn't know how long she floated.

Seconds? Years?

Time wept in the corners of this place.

But then—

a heartbeat.

Her own.

Stronger than it had ever been.

The Birth of Names

In this unformed eternity,

Evelyn began to speak.

Not words—

but names.

Not hers.

But the names of every soul that had cried in the dark.

Every spirit that had whispered for freedom.

Every lost thing that had believed in hope.

With each name she spoke,

a fragment of color sparked into being.

A memory.

A light.

A voice.

The Beforeplace stirred.

Not angrily.

But curiously.

"You… make?"

The voice was primitive, curious, vast.

It came from nowhere and everywhere.

"Yes," Evelyn whispered.

"I make. I remember. I forge what was forgotten."

And with that,

she took the first step.

There had never been a floor—

but now there was.

Because she willed it.

The Architect's Choice

As she walked, the emptiness began to bend around her.

Mountains of memory.

Rivers of regret.

Stars of possibility.

And ahead—

a mirror.

Floating.

Waiting.

In its reflection, Evelyn saw herself.

Not as she was—

but as she might become.

Eyes glowing with creation.

A crown of raw light.

Her voice shaping realities.

But there was something beside that image—

another reflection.

One where she turned away.

Where she rejected the throne.

Where she walked back into the void…

and let someone else rise.

The mirror pulsed.

The Beforeplace waited.

And Evelyn…

chose.

She reached for the flame.

Not the throne.

Not the sword.

But the spark of creation itself.

It burned into her hand—

and for the first time,

the Beforeplace knew fire.

And it hungered for more.

Becoming

Her body began to change.

Not in flesh—

but in truth.

She was no longer Evelyn.

Not just.

She was the Whisper.

The Flame.

The Heretic.

The Mother of the New Dark.

And as she turned,

a path opened.

Not back to the abyss.

But to something new.

A realm that had never existed—

until she dreamed it into being.

One step.

Then another.

And the world began again.

To be continued…

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