( first time writing something without any help of ai or other tools, so point out my mistakes please, and share your thoughts about how i can make story more alive. )
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Modern world 2040,
"A room filled with dust and empty can of energy drink", clothes scatter across the floor, smell coming from clothes is enough to kill any human being, a broken bed with one cushion coverd in a dust.
beside the bed dying table made of wood with computer on it, in front of the flickering screen of computer, a man who in his 20s, dark circles on his face, long hair, eyes full of depression, sitted upon his broken gaming chair, his name is Alex.
On the computer screen game running called "Here's Divine Path", world of Anterior, HDP was popular for his hard level difficulty and choice based story system, in this game u can choose the ending, scenario, character, skills, path and items, game that runs according to players choice, it was the best online game in 2030, but after the game developers released the final boss "The Demon God" game started to fall.
Reason?, the last boss of this game was undefeatable no matter what route or what items u choose u can't defeat him, players started to complain about the boss and how unfair is this, and boss supposed to be defeated after the last battle, but he remains undefeatable.
But deve didn't give them accurate answer for their complain, so players started to leave game one by one and now the current year 2040 game is dead.
No one is playing 'HDP' expect the few players who don't have a life and Alex was one of them, who is stuck in to this game reason he used to much money for items and now he can't quit.
"Sighed! ( Alex ), How long do i have to play this game to defeat the final boss, no is this even possible to defeat him, i wasted to much of my life saving's, my family has given up on me because of this fucking game....
No ( he said with frustration ), I was the one who wanted to become a Pro Gamer and now I am whining because i can't defeat the fucking boss, how long i have been playing this fucking game and yet I am nothing, forget about becoming pro i am on a verge of becoming homeless,
As he was complaining about his life choise and not able to live his life the way he wanted, a sudden sound rang "Ding! Congratulations you have defeated the final boss, Demon God Xir the one of the ancient god".
He looked at his monitor screen and check the massage 5 time's before believing he defeated the final boss, but the question comes in his mind how?,
I didn't do anything ( he said with confusion ), i didn't even touched the keyword but the boss is defeated, how can is this even possible.
He was confused he was trying to figure out what just happened, a undefeatable boss that no one even thought's of defeating, and yet he defeated the boss without even knowing.
He was shocked but suddenly his vision started to get darker and darker, and realises he was fucked, he didn't sleep almost straight one week.
He was so focused on defeating the boss before game developers shutdown "HDP" server's and now he knew what is about to happen him, and it was not the good thing.
It' was getting darker his vision started to fade, and then suddenly he feels sharp pain' in his heart, it started beating fast to fast his pain was growing rapidly, and he falls from his chair, his nose started bleeding he was unable to move.
But he was desperately trying to reach his phone to call ambulance, even his family member one last time,as he about to grabbed his phone but his heart stopped.
And now only one thing he can see in front him, his surroundings, it was absolute 'Darkness'.
He is now in the state of nothingness thinking about his life and dreams, his family, his mother, father and sister.
He was regretting about everything, because he didn't able to see them one last time he couldn't hear their voice one last time as he was cursing himself he remamber massage he seen before dying a massage from game, you have defeated the final boss.
But he didn't know how and when because he was not paying any attention to the game but he defeated the boss, is this some kind of bug, ( he thought ) I am dead and here I am thinking about how i defeated the boss, and he laughed.
As his consciousness started to fade and he thought, 'so, this is it, i guess, atleast my pathetic life comes to end, my parents won't have to be worried about me anymore...i don't have to be worried about myself anymore, i don't have pay my bills, i don't have to hear my sister's neging anymore, i,i.... with this thought's he faded into nothingness..
Or so he thought suddenly he heard the voice calling him, but this was not his name,
"Lucien, Prince Lucien, wakeup Prince Lucien".
Voice of a woman in his 30 strict but gentle tone, prince lucien please, wakeup how long do you intend to sleep,
As he slowly opens his eyes, he see's the room bigger then his own apartment, big enough to be called hall, as he begun to notice his surroundings, first thing he noticed it' was his king size bed made of wood and gold, table full of fruits and bottles of wine.
Room filled with aroma and sweetness of smell like he was on garden or something he never imagined as he lost in his thoughts, women with long black hair and face of absolute beauty, divine wings on her back, and she was wearing maid outfit.
Before he could process what's happening, she ( maid ) says to him, Prince Lucien you will be late for training, it's already morning, how long do you intend to doze off.
He didn't understand anything, prince, traning, what she is taking about and first of all where am I, as he was looking at confusion he asked the woman who is wearing maid outfit.. who are you?, and where am I?, who is Prince Lucien, he asked.
She started laughing.... Prince Lucien are you trying to pull prank on me, who am I, ofcourse i am your adorable personal maid, and you are the prince lucien, and she sighed! You might have hurt your head prince lucien.
He still confused of what's happening, because moment ago he was dying and now he is someone else, and he can't even remember, and then he asked one more time to women, who am i?, and where am i?.
His maid looking at him with confusion, you are the highness, The youngest prince lucien, and you are in the kingdom of Enigma, as she mentioned Enigma, he realised that he is fucked.
Because this was the name of the kingdom in the game he played since last 10 years like insect on his nest, "hero's divine path" he knew everything about this game, small to big details everything, and he was sure he is now in the kingdom of enigma inside the game.
But he don't know how, is it reincarnation or transmigration he don't know, as he was thinking,"voice come".
Prince Lucien are you okay?, do you want me to call for divine doctor she said with worried look.
No..no I am okay i Just wakeup, so I am not fully awake yet, i just had a nightmare nothing more, so you don't have to be worried about me.
How can you say to me not to be worried about you, I am your personal maid i served you from the young age when you were just 10 year old, and now you are telling me not to worried about you, i can't do this, this my duty my prince, i am your personal maid i have to be worried about you.
Alex sighed.. okay so my personal maid can you bring me one glass water. ( Sarcasm )
Obviously my prince, ofcourse i will get you water this my duty to serve with outmost loyalty, as she was about yap more, Alex looks toward's her with smile can you go now.
Ahhm i ll go right away, prince, and she left the room.
After the maid leaves the room to bring water, Alex wondering wtf is happening to him, suddenly he defeated the boss, and he died, and now he is inside the game, fucking hell he sighed!.
But problem is not that he is inside the game, the real problem is he can't remember character named Lucien, and he is Prince, he remembers other characters including royal family of enigma.
But he don't know anything about this character, because game never mentioned anything about lucien, so he don't knew. Fuck whatever, he says with confusion.
As he stood and leaves his bed,
step , step, he is now in front of his window as he opens the window, and looked outside, he couldn't believe his eyes, he was inside the palace big enough to be called football stadium, and he was the owner of this palace, in front of the palace was garden filled with flowers and trees, fountain, river, Divine guardian Guarding his palace every one of them were wearing black armour with the symbols of dragon
Animal and Bird's, he knew what they are, they were divine beings who reside in this world, world of hero's divine path, and he was not surprised because he played the fucking game for 10 years.
He knows everything, he was smiling he was happy that he is inside the game he can learn the divine path he can become strong he can use elements he was happy but moment didn't last long, as he realised that he need to check the date he needs to check fast, he needs to know what time is this, is this the Start of the story or end of the story, and as he finally found the date and he knew he fucked up big one.
Because this was the start of the story and this means only one thing, the...the demon god is alive, and he don't know how he defeated him, yet he is inside the game, his smile leaves him as fast his girlfriend leaved him in his previous life.
He laughed, hhhh and now.
He is looking at outside from the window, what a nice world, about to fuck me fully another time, after 10 years sigh!.
Now he was enjoying the view of nature outside of his window with depression, hhhhhh, why,why. Just why you can't fucking reincarnated me in to normal world or another world, why this fucked up world, as he was cursing with peaceful smile, door knocked.
Your highness it' me your lovely maid, ( women's voice ) he knew who she is, yes he simply told her.
Your highness the prince lucien, here's the glass of water, she said with gentle tone, Alex was not having it this lucien shit but he needed to accept his reality now, so he sighed and, told her leave it here and you can go.
Yes, your highness. Please call me if you need anything, she did not leave she was waiting for his response...
And sighed, ok i will call you if I need anything, so you can Go now.
Looking at him with smile, i will prince lucien, and she leaves.
Ahhhhhhh I can't act like this, i don't know shit about this guy, i need to know about his past, what kind person he is, how much power he holds within royal family, i need to know as he was pulling his hair he feels something.
Why my hair is so long, i need a mirror, mirror where is the fucking mirror, as he was shouting he finally found the mirror and he was shocked beyond shocked.
What the hell this fucker is beyond handsome, ( Alex taking about Lucien ) long silver hair, deep blue ocean eyes, face like a true royal, height was 6.2 he was tall now, in his previous life Alex was build like mugget 5.3 average face with dark circles and he was limp looking guy.
But this guy lucien he is different his body is build like actors in movies, as he was admiring his new body he lifted his shirt, and he see's with drool hell yeah six pack, he never had in his previous life, he was happy now his depression was gone, now he is thinking how to collect information about him ( lucien ) as he was thinking, he remembered something if this the game.
If this is the world of hero's divine path then he might have the access of system to right, and then with calm voice he never realised previously but his voice was deep like a parfect villian, and he was again' shocked after realising, but calm himself focus focus' and he said the miracle words, "system window".
First he thought nothing happened but then suddenly screen appears before his eyes, and he was excited, system was loading.....
Ding!.. do you wish to accept system
[ Yes / No. Please answer ]
And he said fucking yes.
Ding!, Loading status panel.
Ding!, Loading completed.
[ Status panel.
Name - Lucien Vale Enigma ( youngest prince of kingdom of Enigma ). Other info?.
Age - 24 year. ( Virgin )
Bloodline - Goddess of Enigma, yet to be awaken ( one of the ancient god's who created the world ANTERIO. Mother of all gods. )
Divine power - ∞
Techniques/attack/skills - Divine pressure. Divine sword ( low level ). Divine spear ( low level ). Divine Eye ( can see through anything, and gives information ) ( max level ). Bloodline manipulation ( low level ). Divine avatar ( Divine Avatar one can use to go on a state of Divine Path ) ( currently locked ). Divine soul ( one can search others soul' and memory, and copy their techniques and power ) ( low level ). Other features?.
Unique abilities - Reader, intelligent, calm mind, poker face, other?.
Speciallty ( characteristics )- Enjoy killing his enemy, Don't give a fuck about others, genius sucker, other?.
Authority - Royal family 40%,| over the people of kingdom 100%,| influence over other family's 60%,| people who shows affection to you 1%.| Other?
----> STR - 50. | MANA - ∞. | INT - 80. | LUCK - 40. | CHR - 100. | AGI - ?. | DP - ∞ .| OTHER?.
Affection Meter - can understand the other's affection towards you.
Other features? Loked ].
[ Now searching for lucien's memory....]
[ Time 1 minute. Please wait. ]
As system serching for lucien's memory, Alex was looking at his op states.
Wtf this guy lucien has infinite mana and divine power and he also genius, and wtf is this abilities and skills, like wtf how come this guy was not mentioned in the story. As he was admiring his abilities trying to figure out how to use them suddenly door knocked.. and he knows who is behind the door.
Before she could say something, lucien, yes , you can come,...and door opens, your highness, his maid', instructor dan is asking how long do you intend to make him wait in training hall.
Oh i'll be there shortly.
Ok your highness, I'll convey your words to lord instructor.
Oh wait! a second.
Your highness.
Just stand there for a second, lucien while looking at her this is the time to check out my Divine Eye.
And he used he's Divine Eye, his eyes glow dark purple and massive amount of divine power just got consumed from uses of this ability, but he didn't feel anything, because his divine power is infinite, and he smirked, hell yeah this is what you call overpowered cheat..
And the information of maid come before him.
But after seeing her information his happiness faded and he realise he is inside the game where other op character exists.
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( Don't mind my english and grammar, because both of them are fucked. )