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Beneath the Crimson Sky

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Beneath the Crimson Sky is a deeply emotional romantic drama set against the unforgiving backdrop of a war-torn Middle Eastern country. The story centers on two complex and passionate individuals from opposite sides of the conflict: Captain Rafiq El-Amin, a battle-hardened elite soldier with a strict code of honor, and Dr. Hana Song, a courageous humanitarian with Médecins Sans Frontières who risks her life every day to save others. Their fates collide during a mission in a red-tagged village where Rafiq is ordered to eliminate potential threats. To his shock, he finds Hana inside an abandoned clinic, tending to wounded children. Instead of following orders, Rafiq hesitates—and that one moment of hesitation becomes the spark that changes everything. As they cross paths again and again across various combat zones, Rafiq finds himself drawn to Hana’s unwavering compassion, intelligence, and resilience. Despite being surrounded by violence and chaos, Hana remains a source of hope and light, refusing to give up on those around her. Rafiq, in contrast, is a man haunted by his past and bound by duty. Yet, with each encounter, Hana breaks down his emotional walls, reminding him what it means to be human. Their bond intensifies during a ceasefire, and what begins as tension turns into a powerful love story filled with stolen moments, heated arguments, shared grief, and growing trust. But just when it seems like they might have a future, Hana’s outpost is attacked by rebel forces. Refusing to leave her patients, she stays behind—forcing Rafiq to risk his career, his life, and his loyalty to save her. The climax of the novel sees Rafiq defying the military and rescuing Hana from the ruins, making a vow never to leave her side again. In the aftermath, he chooses to walk away from his military position, trading his gun for peace—and his mission for love. Beneath the Crimson Sky is a story about love born in the ashes of war, the strength to choose empathy over orders, and the kind of loyalty that transcends borders. It’s a powerful narrative filled with suspense, heartache, passion, and ultimately—hope.
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Chapter 1 - Smoke and Sand

 

Dawn came quietly, without the usual rumble of artillery or the scream of fighter jets overhead. For once, the horizon was just light. A pale silver bleeding into the dust-choked skies of Mavrah. The kind of morning that tried to pretend peace existed, even if only for a few minutes.

Captain Rafiq El-Amin adjusted the strap on his tactical vest as he walked toward the staging area. His boots crunched over loose gravel, his body moving on the kind of restless energy born not from sleep, but from repetition. Habit. The ritual of preparing for war.

Most of his squad was already assembled—checking gear, reloading, exchanging quiet nods and half-spoken jokes that didn't reach their eyes. None of them had truly rested. They couldn't. Not when they knew what awaited them in the eastern sector of Mavrah.

They were heading into the ruins again.

He scanned the perimeter, expecting to find her there—already pacing, already waiting, already too stubborn to acknowledge fatigue. But Hana wasn't with the others. Not yet.

Rafiq felt a twinge of unease. Not fear—she could take care of herself. No, it was something else. Something unfamiliar. Concern.

Before he could move to check on her, she appeared, stepping into the sunlight like she belonged to it. Her hair was pulled into a tight braid that fell between her shoulder blades, and though her uniform was standard-issue medical gear, she moved like a soldier. Confident. Controlled.

But her eyes gave her away.

They were tired. Not from sleep deprivation, but from carrying too many ghosts.

"You're late," Rafiq said, his tone somewhere between reproach and teasing.

She raised a brow. "You're early."

He offered her a water canteen. She took it without a word, drank, and handed it back.

"You sure about this?" he asked, voice dropping low.

"No," she said honestly. "But I'm going anyway."

Rafiq almost smiled.

She reminded him of himself. The way she didn't hesitate, even when everything told her to run. The way she walked toward the fire instead of away from it. He wondered how long she'd been like this. How many lines she'd crossed to become someone who could watch a child bleed out and still keep her hands steady.

"Alright then," he said. "Let's bring them home."

The eastern corridor of Mavrah was a labyrinth of collapsed buildings, makeshift barricades, and shattered roads that had once carried children to school and fathers to markets. Now they carried nothing but silence and the occasional echo of distant gunfire.

Rafiq led the unit forward, Hana just behind him. The squad moved in pairs, sweeping each ruin, eyes sharp, weapons ready. They weren't alone out here. The enemy never slept, only waited.

The plan was simple: infiltrate the sector, locate the hidden shelter where civilians were rumored to be trapped, and extract as many as possible before insurgents returned to claim the area.

But plans rarely survived the first hour.

They found the shelter by accident. Not through recon, not through maps—but because of a song.

A child's lullaby, drifting faintly through the cracks of a half-buried building. The melody was off-key, cracked by dust and throat, but unmistakable.

Hana stopped in her tracks.

"Do you hear that?"

Rafiq lifted a hand. The squad halted.

They all heard it now.

He motioned to Maaz and another soldier to flank right. Hana stayed close as Rafiq approached the source of the sound, stepping over twisted metal and charred beams.

Beneath a collapsed stairwell, half-hidden behind a rusted generator, was a door.

Steel. Reinforced. Probably once a bomb shelter.

He knocked twice.

Silence.

Then—a soft knock in return.

He exhaled. "Friendly," he called. "Military. We're here to evacuate civilians."

The door opened a crack.

A face appeared—an old man, eyes wary, voice hoarse. "How do we know you're not one of them?"

Rafiq stepped closer. "Because if I were, you'd already be dead."

The door opened wider.

Inside were twenty-seven people. Fifteen children. Four elderly. The rest—women, a few injured men, all gaunt, their skin pale beneath the shelter's dim emergency lights.

Hana moved past him like a current of wind, already kneeling beside a boy with a broken leg, checking pulse, assessing injuries. Rafiq watched as her hands moved like they had minds of their own. She worked quickly, efficiently, but gently. Always gently.

"How long have you been down here?" he asked the man who'd opened the door.

"Six days. We ran out of clean water two ago. The kids haven't eaten since morning yesterday."

Rafiq nodded. "We'll get you out. But we need to move now."

They began the process—splitting rations, securing the wounded on stretchers, organizing the civilians into smaller, manageable groups. Hana refused to leave the side of a young girl who wouldn't stop crying. She sang to her—something soft and lilting, maybe Korean, Rafiq couldn't tell—but it worked. The girl's sobs slowed.

Outside, the world waited to erupt.

Maaz's voice crackled in his earpiece. "Contacts approaching. Two minutes. Light armor. Armed."

Rafiq's jaw clenched. "How many?"

"Too many."

He turned to Hana. "We have to go. Now."

She nodded, lifting the girl into her arms. "Lead the way."

They moved like a river breaking through rock—swift, desperate, determined. Gunfire began to echo in the distance, sporadic at first, then consistent. Not close yet, but coming.

The civilians stumbled behind them, children clinging to adults, the wounded groaning softly. Rafiq positioned his team at the edges, a protective shell.

They were almost out of the sector when the ambush hit.

Gunfire erupted from the rooftops.

Bullets tore into concrete. Screams rang out.

Rafiq dove, pulling a boy out of the line of fire. "Cover the left flank!"

Maaz and two soldiers returned fire, taking out one insurgent, then another. But they kept coming. More shadows on the roofs. More flashes from alleyways.

One of the civilians fell.

Then another.

"We're pinned!" someone shouted.

Rafiq's mind raced. They couldn't go back. Couldn't go forward. Not like this.

Then he saw it—a narrow alley, partially blocked by rubble but navigable.

"This way!" he shouted, waving them over.

One by one, the group funneled through the alley. Rafiq stayed at the rear, covering the retreat, bullets whizzing past his head. Hana was in the middle, still clutching the girl, refusing to let her cry out.

A grenade hit the ground near the entrance.

Rafiq turned, grabbed the last soldier, and shoved him forward.

Then the world exploded.

When he came to, it was chaos.

Dust clouded everything. His ears rang. Pain lanced down his side.

But he was alive.

He rolled over, coughing, and saw Maaz dragging a wounded civilian away from the smoke.

"Hana," he rasped.

Maaz pointed. "She's alright. Up ahead."

Rafiq staggered to his feet, each step a war. He found her kneeling beside the girl, shielding her with her own body. There was blood on her arm. Not hers.

"You're hit?" he asked.

"No," she said breathlessly. "Not mine. Keep moving."

They did.

It took another twenty minutes to reach the evac point.

When they arrived, choppers hovered above the ruins, blades slicing the air, soldiers rappelling down.

Civilians were lifted, one by one. Hana rode with the first wave, refusing to leave the girl behind.

Rafiq waited until the last bird.

As the helicopter lifted off, carrying them all away, he looked down at Mavrah. Smoke rose in black pillars. Fire flickered through shattered windows. But beneath the ash, there were lives still beating.

And hope—fragile but burning.

They landed at base under a blood-red sky.

Hana stepped off the chopper and crumpled to her knees—not from injury, but from sheer exhaustion.

Rafiq was beside her in seconds. She didn't cry. Didn't speak.

He crouched beside her, offered a hand.

She took it.

For the first time, she let him see her break.

"I thought we wouldn't make it," she whispered.

"But we did," he said.

"And next time?"

He looked toward the horizon.

"Next time, we fight harder."

That night, she didn't go to her tent.

Neither did he.

They sat beneath the stars again, closer now. Shoulders brushing. Breaths syncing.

"Why do you stay?" she asked him.

He didn't answer right away. Then—

"Because someone has to. Because if I leave, who will protect them?"

She nodded. "Same."

They didn't say anything more.

Didn't need to.

Somewhere deep inside them, something had shifted. A connection formed not from romance, not yet—but from fire and survival. From seeing each other at their worst, and still choosing to stay.

And when Hana finally leaned her head on his shoulder, Rafiq didn't flinch.

He just let her stay there.

Until morning came.

And with it, the next storm.

The following morning arrived not with a sunrise, but with a haze—orange and gray clinging to the air like smoke from a dying fire. The dust hadn't settled, nor had the memories of the day before. But Rafiq was already dressed in his tactical gear, checking supplies, inspecting weapons, and reviewing the extraction route.

He'd slept for less than an hour.

At exactly 0600, he was at the convoy line. Hana was already there.

Her face was pale but determined, hair tied back, a tactical vest cinched over her plain shirt. A pistol hung at her hip—clearly not her weapon of choice, but a concession to the reality they were about to face.

"Morning," she said.

"You sure about this?"

"Not even a little," she replied. "But I'm going."

Rafiq gave a half-smile. "Figured you'd say that."

They boarded the armored vehicle together. Inside, the atmosphere was tense but familiar. Soldiers checked their weapons in silence, eyes darting toward the map displayed on the wall monitor. The mission was simple on paper: extract civilians from Sector 3 of eastern Mavrah, believed to be the last cluster of survivors in the area.

The catch? That region had become a no-man's land.

"ETA 45 minutes," the driver announced.

Rafiq turned to Hana. "Once we reach the edge of Sector 3, we go on foot. Too many blind corners. The terrain gets messy."

"I know the path," she said. "There's a ravine to the northeast that leads to an old water purification plant. Some of the locals hid there before. If they're smart, they'll be there again."

"Smart doesn't always mean lucky," Rafiq muttered.

As the convoy rolled forward, the landscape outside transformed into a war-torn canvas—collapsed overpasses, shattered windows, a school bus riddled with bullet holes and rusting in the sun.

Hana leaned against the armored wall. "You ever think about what this place looked like before?"

"All the time."

"Do you remember it?"

"I was stationed here years ago. Before the war started. There were street vendors on every corner. Lanterns hanging from balconies during festivals. Music, laughter. Normal things."

She nodded. "I've only seen pictures."

"Consider yourself lucky."

"I don't feel lucky," she said softly.

Neither did he.

The convoy halted with a jolt.

"Checkpoint Bravo. Dismount," barked the driver.

The squad moved like clockwork. Rafiq and Hana stepped out into the shimmering heat. The ground was cracked and dry, weeds growing through the remains of shattered stone. Birds didn't even fly here anymore.

The team fanned out, heading toward the ravine.

It didn't take long for the silence to grow suspicious.

"Too quiet," Lieutenant Maaz said beside Rafiq.

"I know."

Hana led the way down a steep incline, skidding over loose rock, her movements swift and confident despite the unfamiliar gear. She paused at a collapsed fence, pointed toward a crumbling facility in the distance.

"That's the plant."

They approached cautiously. The building had seen better days. Metal beams jutted like broken ribs, and part of the roof had caved in. But the thick concrete walls were intact—solid enough for shelter.

Rafiq signaled two soldiers to sweep the perimeter while the rest followed him and Hana inside.

Inside, the air was thick and musty. Graffiti lined the walls. Broken machinery was scattered across the floor. And in the far corner, beneath a cluster of torn blankets and makeshift beds, movement stirred.

A woman peered out from behind a rusted pipe, clutching a child to her chest.

Then others emerged. A dozen at least. Dirty, thin, terrified—but alive.

A man stepped forward, limping slightly. "Are you… here to help us?"

Rafiq nodded. "We're here to get you out."

The relief that rippled through the group was almost enough to mask the fear still clinging to their faces.

Almost.

"We need to move fast," Rafiq said. "We have a short window."

But just as he finished speaking, the radio crackled.

"Commander, we've got movement—south perimeter. Fast. Armed."

Rafiq swore under his breath.

"Defensive positions!" he ordered. "Secure the civilians!"

The soldiers sprang into action. Hana moved with them, guiding the civilians toward the safest corner of the building.

Gunfire erupted outside.

The insurgents had come quickly and without warning. Not a large force, but enough. Their gunfire rattled the facility's walls.

Rafiq ducked behind a concrete pillar, returning fire. "We need to hold them long enough to get the evac team in here!"

"Ten minutes!" Maaz shouted over comms.

"We won't last that long," Rafiq muttered.

A grenade exploded near the entrance, sending shrapnel spinning. Hana covered the closest child with her body, shielding him as dust and metal shards rained down.

Rafiq saw it—saw her—and something in his chest clenched.

They couldn't lose this fight.

He turned to Maaz. "We flank them. Now. Push them back just enough to break their line. Give the evac birds time to land."

Maaz nodded.

With covering fire from two marksmen on the second level, Rafiq led a three-man team through a side door. The alley outside stank of rotting trash and smoke, but the enemy wasn't expecting them.

A short, brutal exchange followed.

By the time they cleared the south side, the insurgents were falling back.

"Incoming evac!" a voice rang out over the radio. The low thrum of rotors filled the air.

The helicopters descended like angels through dust and fire.

The civilians were loaded swiftly. Crying children. Elderly men helped by soldiers. Rafiq moved among them like a guardian, counting heads, checking wounds.

And then—

A shot.

One of the insurgents had returned, hidden in rubble, rifle aimed at the evac line.

Rafiq turned just as the man fired.

The bullet never hit him.

Hana had seen it. Had moved before anyone else. She slammed into him, pushing him down—and the round tore through her shoulder instead.

She collapsed.

Rafiq rolled over, returning fire, ending the threat. But the damage was done.

Blood pooled beneath her. Her face was tight with pain, teeth clenched.

"No, no, no…" he muttered, tearing open his medkit. "Stay with me, Hana. Don't close your eyes."

"I'm fine," she lied.

"You're bleeding out."

She gave him a strained smile. "Still… better than yesterday's coffee."

He barked a laugh, broken and furious.

A medic rushed over. They lifted Hana into the chopper. Rafiq didn't leave her side.

The last thing he saw before the doors closed was the burning skyline of Mavrah, shrinking into smoke.

They made it back.

Rafiq stood in the field hospital as Hana was wheeled away. Blood stained his shirt—hers. His hands wouldn't stop shaking.

She would live.

The surgeon said the bullet missed anything vital by inches. A few weeks' rest. Some rehab.

She would live.

Rafiq sat outside the tent until night fell. Until the moon climbed above the camp and painted the sand in silver.

Finally, he stepped inside her tent.

She was awake. Barely.

Her arm was bandaged, her skin pale. But her eyes found his.

"You didn't leave," she murmured.

"I don't leave people behind."

She reached out. He took her hand.

They sat there, quiet again. Not out of fear. Not out of exhaustion. But because silence was the only thing sacred left in this world.

"Thank you," she whispered.

"For what?"

"For letting me fight. For seeing me."

He looked down at her hand in his. "You saved me too."

She didn't answer. She didn't have to.

Outside, the camp lights flickered.

Somewhere in the darkness, another fire burned. Another mission. Another child to save.

But for now, they were just two people. Survivors. Soldiers. Healers.

And in that moment, as dawn began to rise once more, the sky no longer bled.

It simply glowed.