i am new to this writing Thing, trying to get my English literary better, still learning, i have passed my work written till now through a friend in my guild { i play AFK journey, and i am pretty high ranked in my server XD }, according to him, I have few problems like, repetitiveness, using same words again and again { like word "golden" in chapter 4}, some time trying to over-stimulate reader with detailed description of characters and setting.
And wholeheartedly accept these shortcomings, and would definitely try to improve.
** wouldn't rewrite the chapters again, not yet. They kinda show my progress, so maybe after end of a major arc or some milestone like 100 chapters**
** update schedule might change a bit :P, need more proof reading, at least 2 or 3 drafts for publishing the chapters**
AND thanks for supporting the book by reading it..... it give me a huge dopamine boost when i see number of views, comments, likes, powerstones going up XD...
take care, author is going off to cook, hopefully won't burn it this time