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Fractured Eden

Sanghmitra_Nirmal
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The world of El’ Valerith was never meant to be stable. Reality here is unstable—broken into shifting fragments where strange anomalies appear without warning. Some are born from distorted history. Some from forgotten possibilities. And some… from things no one can explain. After a sudden death, Toma Itsuki awakens in this fractured world with no clear reason for why he’s there—or why he can sense something others cannot. A massive distortion known only as the Rift stretches across the sky, silently affecting everything beneath it. Most people live their lives pretending it’s just another part of reality. Toma can’t. As he struggles to survive in a society where strength is measured through a strange system called IKO, he is pulled into conflicts that blur the line between survival and meaning. In El’ Valerith, power is not just about force—it is shaped by intent, effort, and the weight of every action. But power comes with consequences. Those who rise too high are called heroes, yet not all heroes save. Some enforce order. Some destroy it. And some lose themselves entirely in what they become. Along the way, Toma crosses paths with others whose fates are just as uncertain as his own—each carrying secrets, ambitions, and wounds that refuse to heal. Together, they begin to uncover that the world they live in is far more unstable than anyone dares to admit. Because in a place where reality itself feels incomplete, one question begins to echo louder than the rest: Is El’ Valerith a world to be understood… or a broken system waiting to collapse? And more importantly— what happens to the people living inside it when it does?
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Chapter 1 - Before the Rift

It was supposed to be an ordinary day. Rain poured

relentlessly against the classroom roof, drowning everything

in a dull, restless noise. There was noise everywhere, but

somewhere in this noise was something unexpected going

on that was beyond anyone's understanding.

Amidst the chaos, Toma remained lost in his own world,

isolated from the confusion of this world, looking out of the

window at the grey pavements that dominated the city

landscape, which he seemed to hate somewhat since that

accident took place.

That's when one of his friends called him, pulling him out of

his imaginative world.

"Hey Toma, are you coming to the party tomorrow?"

"Maybe..."

"Hey dude, don't be so shy. Everyone's coming. You should

come too. Enjoy your life. This is the time to do so. Forget about your past."

"I'll try to come. Tomorrow I'm a little bit busy."

"I know that you are lying, bro. You have to come tomorrow.

I'll email you the venue and timing. Don't be late. I'll be

waiting for you."

"Okay, then. I'll come, but I won't stay for a long time."

Just then, the bell rang, and everyone started to pack their

bags to go to their respective clubs or classes. That day,

Toma had no extra classes, so he packed his bag and went

straight to his apartment.

That day, the sky carried a strange mystery. But to everyone

else except Toma, this day seemed just as normal as it could

be.

But the beginning of something new was way closer than

Toma had expected. Toma looked above and noticed

something unusual in the sky.

The sky was glowing with a pure violet hue, as if someone

had spread lavender flowers in the whole sky. Toma was

unable to believe his eyes. That's when something even

extraordinary caught his eye.

There was a crack-like structure forming in the sky as if God

himself had opened a door to a new dimension.

The air felt heavier than before, as if he had experienced this

somewhere before. He just couldn't remember where he had

felt this sensation before. It was just like some lost

memories were coming back to his mind, but his mind was

rejecting those memories and didn't want to recall that time

again, but on the other side, he wanted to know what was

going on.

He rushed towards his apartment to make sure his only

companion was all right. On the way, he noticed that all the

animals were acting weird. The dogs were howling as if

someone were trying to pluck away happiness from their

lives. They were howling from the top of their lungs. Cats

fought viciously, tearing through each other like it was their

final day alive.

But all the people seemed completely fine. Everyone was

chatting to their friends or family and were living the times

of their lives happily. He noticed a little boy whose balloon

flew in the air and got stuck in a tree. He was crying hard,

then his father came and helped him get his balloon back

from the 'evil tree'.

On his way home he also noticed a very strange

phenomenon happening in nature. Almost all the trees and

plants were dried out, and there was literally no water in

them. The leaves of the trees turned brown. It was even

stranger because the season of spring had just started, so it

was odd that the plants were acting this way.

The tangerine tree he used to admire on his way home every

day was also dried out, and there was no fruit on it. The

previous day the tree was healthy and green with loads of

tangerines, but that day everything in nature seemed to fade

out.

On reaching his apartment, he saw his pet dog and his only

companion, Bruno, acting weird. Usually whenever Toma

came back from school, he used to greet him and wait at the

front door for his arrival, but that day, he was hiding under

the table as if he was afraid of something. He usually didn't

care about anything except when Bruno didn't greet him.

When Toma went near him, he leapt into his master's arms

as if he had been oppressed this whole time. Toma gave

Bruno a warm hug and gave him some snacks. He could feel

the tension of something going on near him, and the

tenseness was increasing every second.

He liked his apartment, but the greedy owner wanted more

rent than he could afford, so he decided to leave.

His apartment was enough for him and his pet dog. It had

two rooms, a fairly large kitchen for a single person living by

itself and a small balcony from which one could see what

was going on in the compound of their building. Next to the

kitchen was a bathroom with a hand shower and a bathtub

attached to a toilet.

In the school, he was just a mediocre student who had a few

friends and always got average grades. He never struggled to

stand out because he never wanted to do so. He liked being

alone since that one tragedy took place, and that changed his

life.

He had no parents, as they sent him to an orphanage at the

age of 3. He didn't even remember what they look like. At

age 11, uninterested in being adopted and with no one

willing to adopt him, he ran away from the orphanage to live

alone. He had no friends, no relatives, no guardians, no one

he liked, nor anyone who liked him.

Something that happened on a particular night was a

mystery to Toma, as he was unable to remember what

happened that night. No matter how much he tried, it just

never came to his mind.

Toma broke the silence and started to cook the only food

that comforted him at these lonely times, Aglio e Olio. He

just loved that pasta so much that he could eat it for a whole

week without getting bored.

Just as he was going to eat his meal, his eyes fell on a picture

of him and his best friend. In the picture, both of them held

gold medals and laughed, free from any worry about the

future. He looked at the picture and the gold medal that sat

beside it and became quiet. Silence hurt him more than any

spear could.

The moment he hit the mattress, that familiar, unsettling

sensation crept back into his chest–a quiet warning that

whatever was coming next was far from normal.

He stood up from his bed and walked to his living room and

grabbed a box. The box held a wide variety of items. From

beneath the disordered pile of memories, he pulled out a

bracelet with emerald beads and silver chain and wore it on

his wrist.

With a certain unease, he again lay on his bed, and soon he

was pulled into a world of imagination, the only world he

liked being in.

The next morning, he woke up and drank a cup of coffee and

wished Bruno a good morning, which didn't turn out

that way. The moment he looked at the clock, he realised he

was already late for the train and it would leave in a few

minutes. His apartment was quite far from the station, and

the bus was also late.

It was certain he was going to miss the train. If he missed

this train, he will be, no doubt, late for the club meeting.

He gave Bruno some food and rushed out of the apartment

without having any breakfast, but when he reached the

station, the train had already left, so he texted his club

members about the delay and had breakfast at the station.

He got on the train to reach the station. The silence was an

awkward one. Stepping off the train, he made a dash for the

meeting venue.

When he reached the meeting, the meeting had already

started. Toma was part of the nature club in the school, and

that day's meeting was in order to protect the environment

from deforestation and the potential harms it can cause to

our surroundings.

The weird act of the plants from the previous day was still in

his mind, but he didn't speak about that fact. He thought

everyone would think that he was going crazy.

After a so-called boring meeting, Toma was exhausted. He

was too tired to do anything, yet he decided to head for the

party his friend was talking about because he promised his

friend that he would come there.

So he walked down the road and headed for the party. On

the way there, he saw an old lady laying on the footpath; he

hurried there to help her.

"Ma'am, are you all right? Is there anything I can help you

with?"

"Yes, my dear child. I was walking to pick up my grandson

from his school when suddenly I felt a sharp pain in my

chest."

"Ma'am, I have some paracetamol with me. If you want, I

can give you a tablet to ease the pain for now, but I would

recommend you go to the hospital and get some medicine."

"You are so sweet, my child. Thank you so much for your

help."

The old lady took medicine from Toma and ate it. Then she

looked at Toma that made him feel uncomfortable. Just

when he was about to walk away, the old lady stopped him.

"I would like to tell you something, but I want you to keep it

to yourself. I don't usually tell about it to everyone because

no one believes me–."

"What is it, ma'am?"

"My dear, I am a seer, and I can see your future. I want to let

you know that something had already begun in your life.

The rift is always there and is watching you."

"Can you also see that? The crack in the sky? Nature is

acting weird to all of this, or is it just me who is

overthinking?"

"Yes, I can also see that crack. That is something only some

people can see. I have seen a lot of people who are not even

able to see the violet sky, but there were only a handful of

people that I have met in my life who are able to see that."

"What is it? Do you know what is going on? Is the world

going to end? What do you know about that?"

"I know nothing about that. I do know that some people like

this exist who can see the mysterious crack because I have

read some articles about that but to no avail... In my whole

life, I was able to achieve nothing related to this. I would like

you to forget about this topic–. But it certainly is true

something is simmering in your life."

Saying so, the old lady walked down the street, and before

Toma could interpret anything or ask her what the rift was,

she was gone. The tension in the air made Toma sick of

whatever was going on in his life.

Trying to forget about everything that happened to him by

far, he crossed the road and took a taxi to the venue of the

party. Reaching there, he was greeted by his 'friends.' He ate

food and enjoyed it with others but still somewhat seemed

off.

The day was unusual, and even when everything seemed to

be normal for everyone, it still wasn't. The loud music and

bright lights were making his mind go numb, and he

couldn't stand even a minute there. So he took his bag and

left the party.

He was thinking way too much about everything that had

happened so far. To get some relief from this hectic

schedule, he decided to go to the gardens nearby his school.

The tranquil view of trees around a central pond, looking

like a gem, always gave him mental peace.

He was about to cross the street to catch the bus on the

other side when something enormous–like an elephant–

started running at him. It wasn't too big, though. It was a

truck that wasn't honking and was moving at full speed. It

lacked brakes as well. The truck's lights were off, and the

driver was operating it recklessly. He realised it was too late

the instant he turned his head sideways.

Everything suddenly turned black, and he could see nothing.

It felt like something was pulling him inside a void.

An empty void with no beginning or end.

He could feel his breath; it meant that he was alive, but he

didn't know what was going on.

Darkness swallowed everything.

He was falling... or maybe rising.

Nothing made sense- not the darkness, not the falling. He

tried his utmost to wake up if it were a dream but he

couldn't wake up.

His eyes suddenly fell on his body and he saw his body

started to shrink.

Then he felt it-

Something pulling his soul apart.

He was desperately trying his best to keep his soul to

himself.

Then he saw light like two shining hands coming towards

him as if they were trying to help him and he tried his

utmost to rush towards those hands.

But the darkness was plucking his soul away from him. The

darkness on his body felt cold and depressing. The shining

hands were like a hope for him.

And the next moment he opened his eyes, he was under an

odd tree. The tree's branches were spreading like a monster

waiting for the right moment to come and lurk on Toma but

the very next moment the tree felt like as if it was trying to

hug him.

Toma had never seen something like that in his life. He

looked at his body and it was completely fine. But somehow

he was badly injured. As he tried to sit straight up, he was

pinned down by someone.

He turned to his side and noticed an elf that was holding a

dagger in one hand and with the other pinned him down.

"What are your plans, human? Are you here to kill us?", said

the elf with sharp eyes and a killing intent.

Toma was confused and couldn't understand anything what

was going on. She looked straight at him and asked him

again.

"Speak fast. Are you here to kill us just like those other

corrupted 'heroes'?"

"No, I'm not a hero and I am not here to kill you. Where am

I right now?"

"You don't even know where you are. Stop fooling with me. I

know your motives and those creepy high-ranked-

government-dogs motives?"

"What are you talking about? Who are you? Why are you

trying to kill me? I don't even know who you are. Where am

I? And why would I try to kill you?"

The long-eared creature realising that he was not a threat to

them, released him but knocked him out unconscious. Toma

lay motionless and the elf carried him up to somewhere.