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"Why did you betray us?! What did we ever do to you?!"
For a brief moment, the figure of a young woman could be seen stretched across the sky.
This young woman was one of the most gifted individuals in the Void Realm.
The Void Realm itself was a place where beings who had surpassed the Divine Realm went to transcend their limits.
Now, she faced a man floating in the vast emptiness before her.
He was none other than the traitor of the Void Realm.
But so what? He didn't care whether he was labeled a traitor or not—he accepted it without a second thought.
In fact, he took great pleasure in killing those on the woman's side.
And in the moment she was truly slain by his hands...
His expression shifted. No longer did it show any joy.
It was clear from his face—he had lost all sense of purpose.
"This isn't it... How boring. I have to do it all over again."
...
Time passed, and the man moved on to his next plan.
Look—before him stood the gods, immortals, and divine beings of every race.
In that instant, he knew: he had become the enemy of all living things in the universe.
But it didn't matter, whether he smiled or remained expressionless.
The undeniable truth remained—there was no trace of regret on his face.
If memory served, his goal had always been to create enemies in every dimension.
And now, that goal had finally come true.
But why? Why was there no satisfaction on his face?
Shouldn't he have found peace, even if just for a moment, after achieving his mission?
Yet, deep in his mind, he couldn't shake the feeling that everything he had done was meaningless.
"In the end, you're all ants. Opposing me is pointless. Do you understand?"
"No! You've defied the heavens! You must die!"
"Die? Are you serious? Do I really need to spell it out for you?"
Suddenly, his expression turned icy cold.
At first, his enemies didn't care about what he had to say.
But after hearing his words, they began to question—was this man insane?
"I am Tao. I have transcended all worldly limits. I am the very being you've all worshiped. I am heaven itself."
"Tao?! Impossible! How could the heavens betray us?! We don't believe you!"
"Attack him!" someone shouted.
Several attacks shot toward him in an instant.
Yet, just before they reached him...
He casually raised a hand, utterly unbothered.
And in the blink of an eye, all his enemies were gone.
Their bodies dissolved into particles—completely erased.
"Didn't I already tell you? You're nothing but ants. No matter how many times I reincarnate, life remains unchanged," he muttered, fully aware that he could no longer endure this empty existence.
He could end his own life a thousand times.
But no—it would be meaningless.
"Sigh... I guess it's time to return to my original body. As for my next life... I'll figure it out later."
Shrink!
In a distorted dimension filled with spatial anomalies lay the body of a terrifying man.
This was Tao—the very being who had become the enemy of all creation. The creator. The strongest.
"Hah... So boring. They're trash. What now? No one can threaten me anymore. In the past, I used to get riled up by their words... but now? That's all behind me."
He stretched his shoulders absentmindedly.
As he loosened the tension in his body, a sudden thought flashed through his mind.
"That's it! What if I reconnect my mortal link? Maybe I can reincarnate again."
Without hesitation or overthinking, he activated an unknown technique.
Even that technique gave off an aura of rejection.
"I must return! I no longer care! No matter what world I end up in—I want to live again!"
Shring!
"Huh? What's happening?! Did I mess up? No... But what is this formation beneath my feet?" he muttered, confused by the unfamiliar circle glowing under him.
Unfortunately, before he could figure it out...
His body vanished—no one knew how or why.
...
On Earth, just outside the city of Shanghai—
At Xin Hospital, on the city's outskirts—
A sudden explosion shook the entire building.
At first, panic swept through the hospital.
But calm returned when it was discovered that a young woman had survived.
"Congratulations, ma'am. You've been rescued. We honestly didn't expect the explosion to happen right after the baby was born."
"Is that so? I'm just glad he's safe. Let me see him."
"Of course."
Without delay, I felt a soft touch on my head and shoulders.
I didn't understand why I'd been sent to this unfamiliar world.
But when I saw the woman's face, I wondered—have I been reincarnated?
More than that, I could feel the power still lingering inside me.
Though I hadn't retained all my strength from my previous life...
How could I not smile with joy?
"Hehe... Hehehe..."
"So cute! He's already laughing! I'm so glad he's perfectly healthy."
"Darling! Are you alright?" a man's voice called from the operating room doorway.
When I saw his face, I knew—he looked just like me.
He must be my father.
"Hehehe... Pa... Ma..."
"Did you hear that?! He just spoke!"
"Amazing! Could he be blessed with extraordinary talent?"
"Don't be ridiculous. Cultivation is meaningless in this world now. I just want him to grow up and work in research."
I heard my parents bicker for a while.
But eventually, they let it go.
"Forget it. I've already chosen a name for him. His name will be Han Li. A heart as vast as a flowing river."
"Han Li... I like it. I approve!"
My name is Han Li... and this is the beginning of my journey to find the meaning of life.
No matter what happens, my only goal now—is to enjoy this life.
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