Crimson Veil
Episode 10: Whispers from the Abyss — The Demon Generals Move!
[Page 1] – Splash Page
Scene: A vast dark chamber beneath Malgrin's castle. Six enormous thrones surround a pool of swirling void. The Demon Generals gather. Each radiates terrifying energy.
Narration Box:
"As the Tyrant's fragments awaken, the true powers of the demon realm rise from the shadows."
[Page 2] – Scene: Recovery Camp outside Northern Ridge
Ren wakes in a tent, body wrapped in bandages. His spear lies beside him, cracked. Lira sits nearby, unconscious. Kael paces outside.
Kael (serious):
"You pierced its core, Ren. It vanished. But the energy it left behind... it's inside you now."
Ren (weakly):
"It called me unready. That was just a fragment... how powerful is the real Tyrant?"
[Page 3] – Scene: Demon Realm – Abyssal Council
Malgrin stands before the Demon Generals:
Irys – Chain-Wielder Dravon – Beast of 10,000 Claws Velzaar – Void Sorcerer Threx – Iron Devourer Nyzael – Shadow Queen Erlion – The Pale Flame
Malgrin:
"The First Fragment is gone. But its power is now within the boy. It will awaken him... or destroy him."
Dravon (growling):
"Then let me tear the next one from his corpse."
Velzaar (calmly):
"No. He must be guided. Let him find the next fragment... and face his fate."
[Page 4] – Cut to: Human Realm, Kael's Device Beeping
Kael:
"New signal. Second Fragment just surfaced... deep beneath the Abyssal Ruins."
Ren (standing up):
"Then that's where we go. No waiting. We strike first this time."
[Page 5] – Scene: Journey Begins
Ren, Lira, and Kael gear up. Ren's spear glows faintly with the mark from the last battle. Lira now carries a new short blade infused with holy energy.
Lira:
"The Abyssal Ruins… I studied them. It's not just another ruin. It's a graveyard of gods. We'll need more than luck."
[Page 6] – Meanwhile, Back at Malgrin's Throne
Nyzael (smiling cruelly):
"If it's the Abyss they seek... then let the Abyss answer back. I'll meet them there."
She vanishes into a swirl of black mist.
[Page 7] – Scene: Outside the Abyssal Ruins
The team stands at the edge of a giant chasm. The wind howls with whispers. Chains dangle into the abyss like veins from the sky.
Kael (whispering):
"It's below us. The second fragment is moving. Waiting."
Ren (gripping his spear):
"Then let's finish what we started."
[Page 8] – Final Panel
In the abyss, a monstrous, incomplete demon eye opens in the dark — vertical, ancient, and filled with fire.
Narration Box:
"In the darkness below... another piece awakens. But so does something else."
Text:
Next Episode: "Beneath the Ruins — Eyes of the Forgotten God!"