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The Penitent Code

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"In this game, XP won’t save you. Only forgiveness can." Marcus Vale—a disgraced soldier turned convict—is offered a strange deal: serve time inside Sanctuary, a grim fantasy MMO where power isn’t earned by killing, but by atoning. Assigned the lowest-tier class—Wraithbound—Marcus can’t gain levels through combat. His only path forward? Emotional growth, moral choices, and quests that require real vulnerability. Guided by Nell, a malfunctioning support AI with too much personality, Marcus stumbles through awkward confessions, absurd moral trials, and a world that seems far too alive. Along the way, he gathers unlikely allies, uncovers secrets buried in the code, and learns that Sanctuary might not just be a game. Because the monsters aren’t just in the dungeons. Some of them are wearing his face. A lighthearted but emotionally gripping LitRPG with realistic dialogue, slow pacing, and in-depth character growth—perfect for fans of Re:Zero, The Wandering Inn, and The First Law series.
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Chapter 1 - Terms and Conditions

I was supposed to be in a prison cell, not standing in a cold, white room with nothing but a chair and a floating screen.

The screen blinked. Then a soft beep.

Welcome, Marcus Vale. Sentence Confirmed. You have been selected for the SANCTUARY Initiative.Accept Terms to Proceed.

I stared at the words. A few hours ago, I'd been shackled, waiting for the guards to throw me into lockup. Then someone in a suit came in, said something about a "correctional gaming system" and "alternative rehabilitation," and next thing I knew, I was being injected with something cold and electric.

Now I was here.

I blinked. "Is this a VR sim?"

Nothing answered. Just the screen, humming like it was impatient.

Accept Terms?

I sighed. "Sure. What could go wrong?"

The screen pulsed, and the world tilted. My body felt like it fell backward through a tunnel. No wind, no sound—just weightless falling.

Then—

Pain.

Not real pain. Not like being stabbed. More like… being crushed from the inside out by guilt I didn't understand.

I hit something hard. Gravel. My head spun. I opened my eyes.

The world wasn't white anymore. It was gray. Dusty. Broken.

I lay on cracked stone, surrounded by low buildings that looked like someone had tried to render a medieval village but got lazy halfway through. The sky above was overcast, and the air smelled like rust and smoke.

There was a UI overlay blinking faintly at the edge of my vision.

Class: WRAITHBOUNDLevel: 0Experience: 0Soul Integrity: Fractured (1/10)Combat Access: LockedPrimary Objective: Seek Redemption

I groaned. "Locked combat? Seriously?"

I pushed myself up and stumbled to my feet. My clothes were plain—gray shirt, black trousers, no armor. I had a single item in my inventory: a tarnished chain. No sword. No skills. No hope.

"Great," I muttered. "They dropped me in as a tutorial boss."

A door creaked somewhere nearby. I turned, instinctively raising my hands.

Nothing attacked me. Yet.

Instead, an old man with a cart shuffled by. He didn't look up. His face was pale and tired. Like he'd seen too much and didn't care anymore.

"Hey," I called. "Where am I?"

The man paused, looked at me, then muttered, "One of the broken. Keep walking, ghost."

He pushed his cart away without another word.

I stood there, awkward and confused.

Wraithbound. That was my class? What did it mean? I opened the status screen.

WRAITHBOUND – A cursed class. You cannot gain experience through violence.You must seek redemption.Sins Echo. Pain Echoes. You will Echo.

Not super helpful. But the part about no violence? That felt like a bad joke.

How was I supposed to survive in a game world where I couldn't fight?

I wandered forward, keeping close to the walls. The town—or whatever this was—felt abandoned. Doors were shut, windows boarded. Somewhere in the distance, I heard a scream. Not the exciting kind. The kind that made your spine go tight.

I found a broken sign lying in the dirt. I flipped it over.

Welcome to DUSTEND. Confess. Cleanse. Continue.

I didn't like the sound of that.

"Confess, huh?" I said, mostly to keep myself from losing it. "Do I get bonus points if I say 'I'm sorry' with tears?"

A prompt appeared.

Confession Detected. Soul Integrity +1.

I froze. "Wait, what?"

The message stayed a second longer, then vanished.

I wasn't even serious. But somehow, the system thought I was? Or maybe it didn't care.

I checked my status again. My Soul Integrity had bumped up to 2/10. Still fractured. But not as bad.

"Well… okay then." I scratched my neck. "Maybe this is how I level."

I kept moving. Eventually, I found a wooden bench outside what looked like a chapel. It leaned to one side, windows shattered. A rusty bell sat in a cracked tower above.

I sat down.

My stomach growled. Did I even need to eat here? Did pain mean anything?

A notification dinged.

You are now in a Safe Zone.Meditation unlocked.

"Meditation," I said aloud. "Sure. Let me just zen my way out of guilt."

I tapped the option.

The world dimmed slightly. A warm glow wrapped around the edges of my vision. I felt… calm.

Not peaceful, exactly. But not drowning anymore.

A memory surfaced. A real one.

A car. Rain. Someone shouting my name. Then silence.

I shut it down.

Not now. I wasn't ready for that.

Another prompt popped up.

Memory Suppressed. Echo Delay Triggered.

"What does that mean?"

No answer, of course. The system loved being cryptic.

I stood up, brushing dirt from my pants. I didn't feel stronger. But I felt something. A direction. Like the game—or whatever this was—wanted me to move forward.

I turned toward the center of town.

Then a voice rang out behind me. Dry. Sarcastic.

"You don't walk like someone who's accepted his fate yet."

I spun.

A girl leaned against the chapel wall, arms crossed. She wore layered armor made from scrap parts, dyed black and red. Her eyes scanned me like I was a puzzle.

"Wraithbound, right?" she said. "Figures."

I blinked. "You can tell?"

"Only the Wraiths look that lost their first day."

She pushed off the wall and walked over.

"I'm Nell," she said. "Support-class dropout, semi-professional data scavenger, and your new best friend. Unless you get killed in the next hour, which is… honestly possible."

"…Marcus," I said.

"Yeah. Welcome to Sanctuary, Marcus. Try not to die before your first confession. It gets messy."